Please can someone help me rewrite this sentence?

[ayize]

"My two letters of recommendation from both of my Criminal Justice professors is proven that I mindset of an excellent student ready to study law and my letter of recommendation from my law firm is proof that I can work in a legal enivornment. "

Please help me rewrite this sentence to make it sound better and more intelligent. Thanks

[wendlesora]

My two letters of recommendation I received from my Criminal Justice professors shows that I have the mindset and work ethic of an excellent student, who is prepared to study criminal justice. My law firm has given me a letter of recommendation which is proof that I'm able to operate in a legal environment.

[hawiovi]

Letters of recommendation are not proof of anything. Lawyers, having analytical minds, will not appreciate being told something that is obviously an overstatement of the intent of the letters. Enclose copies of the letters and let the reader come to his or her own conclusions.

Try something like this: Enclosed are two letters of recommendation from Criminal Justice professors at (name of school), where I studied (indicate types of classes), and another from (name of law firm), where I was recently employed.