Writing a book need help?

[felabeorbt]

I need help with capitalization and punctuation. please do it for me

One day my family and I decided to go on a picnic.

mother packed fried chicken and a big chocolate cake

my sister in law brought some potato salad and twenty two cans of cola

dad hooked our boat to the camper and we were on our way

quick mother shouted get the food inside

[porter]

I need help with capitalization and punctuation. please do it for me

One day my family and I decided to go on a picnic.

mother packed fried chicken and a big chocolate cake

my sister in law brought some potato salad and twenty two cans of cola

dad hooked our boat to the camper and we were on our way

quick mother shouted get the food inside

I need help with capitalization and punctuation. please do it for me

One day my family and I decided to go on a picnic.

Mother packed fried chicken and a big chocolate cake and

my sister in-law brought some potato salad and twenty two cans of cola.

Dad hooked our boat to the camper and we were on our way. "Quick," mother shouted, "get the food inside."

[danil70]

One day, my family and I decided to go on a picnic. Mother had packed the fried chicken and big chocolate cake. My sister-in-law had added the potato salad and enough drinks for everyone. Dad hooked the boat onto the camper, and mother had to hurry up and get the food inside so we could get going.

There you go.

[artzai]

One day, my family and I decided to go on a picnic. Mother packed fried chicken and a big chocolate cake. My sister-in-law brought some potato salad and twenty-two cans of Cola. Dad hooked our boat to the camper and we were on our way.

"Quick," mother shouted, "get the food inside!"

If this is the beginning of your story, then there needs to be a hook so that it grabs the attention of the reader.