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10 points! PLEASE! Could you correct the text, if there are spelling errors?

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10 points! PLEASE! Could you correct the text, if there are spelling errors?

Postby wal49 » Sun Jun 24, 2012 3:53 am

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The experience in the restaurant industry in recent years has enabled me to develop robust capabilities for managing relationships with customers, particularly in direct contact with end users. I developed this way, good listening skills, communication and collaboration.
2)Even at the organizational level, the extensive experience, has enabled me, year after year, to increase my skills. Especially in recent years of work. In particular I have had the opportunity to better manage situations of high workload concentrated in a few hours, for which to synchronize and empower the staff has been component fundamental for the good result of the job.
3)I have a very good knowledge of Personal computer: word processing, online search engine technology and more.
I have good knowledge of programs like Excel, Powerpoint, email software.
4)I enjoy meeting and being around people thanks to my humorous spirit. I have worked at a high pace, but never compromised my accuracy.
My strengths are dependable, precision, organized and friendly. I am highly motivated and look forward to the variety of work which this position will give me.
5)Driver's license (license B) lifeguard Patent
6)The undersigned Giuseppina De Nardo, as entrepreneur of "LUVAL," I testify that Simone Di Russo has served in the organization, from 28/05/2009 to 11/09/2009, during which time he has performed with commitment various activities under me. In particular, during the months of collaboration, he worked as lifeguard. In the period of permanence at our establishment has distinguished for reliability, accuracy and organization proving excellent communication skills demonstrated by the rapid insertion and contribution to group work.
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10 points! PLEASE! Could you correct the text, if there are spelling errors?

Postby dickens93 » Sun Jun 24, 2012 3:54 am

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The experience in the restaurant industry in recent years has enabled me to develop robust capabilities for managing relationships with customers, particularly in direct contact with end users. I developed this way, good listening skills, communication and collaboration.
2)Even at the organizational level, the extensive experience, has enabled me, year after year, to increase my skills. Especially in recent years of work. In particular I have had the opportunity to better manage situations of high workload concentrated in a few hours, for which to synchronize and empower the staff has been component fundamental for the good result of the job.
3)I have a very good knowledge of Personal computer: word processing, online search engine technology and more.
I have good knowledge of programs like Excel, Powerpoint, email software.
4)I enjoy meeting and being around people thanks to my humorous spirit. I have worked at a high pace, but never compromised my accuracy.
My strengths are dependable, precision, organized and friendly. I am highly motivated and look forward to the variety of work which this position will give me.
5)Driver's license (license B) lifeguard Patent
6)The undersigned Giuseppina De Nardo, as entrepreneur of "LUVAL," I testify that Simone Di Russo has served in the organization, from 28/05/2009 to 11/09/2009, during which time he has performed with commitment various activities under me. In particular, during the months of collaboration, he worked as lifeguard. In the period of permanence at our establishment has distinguished for reliability, accuracy and organization proving excellent communication skills demonstrated by the rapid insertion and contribution to group work.
Lots of errors in grammar. Too many to go through right now.
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10 points! PLEASE! Could you correct the text, if there are spelling errors?

Postby chason62 » Sun Jun 24, 2012 4:01 am

That would take a while to fix. There must be 50 errors in it, not including spelling errors. Perhaps start off with pasting it into Word and having the software check it; and then using an online grammar checker. Keep in mind that Word doesn't always mark grammar errors wrong, and often marks grammar that is right as wrong.

Frankly, you should rewrite the whole thing from scratch.

Is English your first language? If not, I truly commend this as a great effort, but still, it's got many, many errors in it. Even if it were totally correct, it is VERY wordy and busy.
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