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Do you ever think of the people that don’t have the basic necessities to live? Do you put yourself in their place and know that you don’t receive help? In some countries the percentage is more than the fifty percent, and they don’t have the opportunity to take advantage of the life that they dream to have, to have a good life, for them it turns out basically into getting food, comfort and learning.


Good afternoon Miss and class present my name is Dominga Risopatrón and today I come here to talk about the reality that so many people of the world endure, I don’t want you to do things out of obligation, to finish this oratory with the girl that changed her mind, put in action and starts switch lives of these people that suffer day after day.

I am sure that all of you see some people in the traffic lights asking for money hopping that someone will give them some money, but most people ignore them, or you know the situation of classy people, knowing that the money that we can give them will be used buying Mc donalds, clothes, going to the cinema, among others. And when we are buying they hope that at night they will be able to buy a piece of bread or simply a glass of water. In case you don’t know one hundred sixty seven millions of children have problem of growth because they don’t eat properly which produces malnutrition and a hundred of them don’t go to the school because their parents don’t have the money to pay. Eleven million out of necessity for hygiene, medications vaccines. Millions of children still live the life of adults without infancy, experimenting desolation, violence, abuse and isolation.

All of you are seventeen years old and we can’t do big things to change this, giving millions of dollars an give up, life isn’t based on dollars so we can do a create changes order in our homes and donate clothes that we don’t wear, add supermarket items asking food to help and also with a toy we can make a child happy. These people not only are expecting materials things, they need and wish learn to read, write, add, all things that we learn in the school and we are capacity to teach and if we don’t are prepared we can approach them and converse, asking about his life and give them a smile.

Now comes the winter and the situation put complicated, they don’t have house to live, clothes to wrap, remedies for diseases, in this season is a good time to help.

Taking many problems I am surprised as they manage to get ahead, not telling to God that have a big problem otherwise saying to the problem that they have a big God.

Not mentioned that we do good things and help us to look good, doing the things because we want and we feel. And if you feel let is get to act and change a lot of people that need and expect from they day that they born. Delivering a smile, quality of life better where they live and a life where they enjoy.

Thanks you