Could warner bros. film my script ?

[victorio83]

A school is seen exploding very detailed. A fire ball rises and the windows explode.
CUT TO:
10 YEARS LATER INT. OFFICE - AFTERNOON
An office is seen being filled with smoke.
JACK
People say its crazy to explode a school but not to create slaves. They say robbing a bank is insane but banks cause poverty all over the planet.
Jack is a wild guy. Appears with no morals and wild clothing style. Handsome and intelligent.
INT. BANK - AFTERNOON
JACK points a gun towards the Forehead of the person working at the bank.
Mary is wearing a very realistic mask of a man, filling a bag with notes as a gunshot appears.
They both run out with bags full of money.
In the last shot the clerk rises back up from under the desk with a hole in his hat.
Jack and Mary jump into they’re open Car and take off fast.
INT. JACKS BASEMENT - AFTERNOON
JACK
I never killed a living person. Not even when I put the whole office cold. These people wether you like it or not. They died long ago. They’re body’s just continued working like machines after they’re souls died. They wanted to die. I could see it in they’re eyes every morning.
Mary sits down on Jacks lap with 2 beers.
Mary gives one beer to jack.
Now Mary pulls off her mask.
Mary is a Beautiful and wild girl. Jacks big love. She isn’t afraid of confrontation and she is very confident.
MARY
Here it is Babe, our new Schedule. We rob banks every Monday and Casinos on Fridays.
EXT. BIG CITY BANK - DAY
Jack and Mary are standing in front of the bank with police Uniforms. They are smoking and looking around.
JACK
Ok let’s go, now or never.
Jack pulls a trigger and the banks entrance explodes.
A lot of smoke and fire.
People are screaming and running around.
Jack and Mary run in the bank and see dead body’s. Some people are screaming and crawling on the floor.
MARY
It gets easier every time, doesn’t it ?
The whole action is seen from above. People running around, gunshots, police sirens.
JACK
We just came in the main area. Where all the gold is stored. All the big notes.
Jack and Mary walk towards the main area trough crushed security gates.
MARY
But it was gone. Not one single cent was left in there.
EXT. BIG CITY BANK - NIGHT BEFORE
Jack and Mary are planting C4 explosive devices all over the main entrance wall.
JACK
Let me take you back a bit more.
INT. HIGH SCHOOL - DAY
A Young jack is sitting in his chair listening to his teacher. He wears a good hoodie and Jeans. Paying close attention and writing down notes.
JACK
That’s right. High school. The place which is supposed to prepare us for life. But the funny thing was, these teachers didn’t even have life’s. They came to school every morning just like us. We we’re on the same level. And I wouldn’t allow them to take over with the authority part. They forced us to come here, I mean you don’t become friends with Your kidnapper, right ?
EXT. BIG CITY BANK - NIGHT
Jack and Mary are planting more C4. They look happy and giggle to each other.
MARY
I was in Jacks class too.
A young Mary is sitting in her chair writing down notes. She puts her hand up as the teachers ask’s something. Small talk with her friends in class.
MARY (CONT’D)
I used to like school. I believed what the teachers told us. The whole thing. We can become everything, even president of the united states. And I believed it, actually by know, I know it. But I had my own plans, I didn’t want to be your average clerk. Trading your precious time for a pittance. I always knew I was meant for more.


not finished yet

[caffar]

Promising

[jen]

do you live in hollywood if yes 40% chance. if you live far far away from maybe warner bros studio no. but what you got to do is go to warner bros studio give a guy your script.

[eorl]

It has promise. :)

But don't put too many hopes on a large name company picking it out. There are thousands upon thousands of aspiring film writers who submit scripts and ideas to Warner Bros each year, and only a few will ever have any success.

Not trying to be cruel or discouraging, and you should never give up hope. ;)
But it's better to be prepared as much as possible for disappointment, that way you can pick yourself up and carry on more easily if things don't work right the first time.


There's also a lot more chances for independent films nowadays, too. If this film is something you're really invested in, see about finding a group of people who would be interested in helping you out?