How do I start this story?

[claudius]

Here's the short little overview I wrote in art class today. It was a half day, so classes were short, giving me less time to write, so it's most definitely not the best description ever. If you need more details, ask away and I'll try my best to answer. The characters don't have names yet, so I'll call them A, B, and C. Here's the summary:

A teenager (A) falls in love with her best friend (B), who turns out be be a kind of psychic vampire. He's slowly leaching the life from her without realizing it. One of the girl's good friends (C) notices that A hasn't been feeling well and sets out to find out what was wrong. She finds out what B is (I don't know how yet; it's not important right now) and tries to get the A to break up with him. A accuses her friend of being paranoid and jealous because of how persistent she was getting. C knows that A wouldn't make it after too long, and she attempts to figure out how to stop B's involuntary actions.

[leonie36]

Maybe it could go a little something like this:
I had just recently noticed how (really good description of him, like how his eyes sparkled when he looked at her, ect.). He was my best friend, and usually I was comfortable around him, but since that first day when I... I guess really met him... I've been getting more nervous around him. I feel sick to my stomach, weak, and I can't help but crave to be with him more. (<-- foreshadowing/ hint ;D) then go on to a scene of a and b hangin out :)

[wakeley58]

Start off with A and B doing some typical teen thing. Seeing a movie, going to the beach, something like that. A is OBVIOUSLY in love with B (convey this without explicitly going out and saying it). Meanwhile, all the while they are engaged in the activity, B is sucking the life from A. Gives the whole "hanging out" thing a more sinister side.

Good luck!

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[colten]

Usually I like to start my writing in the middle of the action, like with a preface or an "en media res" type thing.