I need a thesis statement for my communism essay?

[patwin87]

I have to write a research essay in english on why communism has failed as a political system. I am having troubles coming up with the thesis statement. i am using examples such as no justice, no private property rights, economic failure, culture death, and destruction of health care. please help!!

[sheridan93]

I have to write a research essay in english on why communism has failed as a political system. I am having troubles coming up with the thesis statement. i am using examples such as no justice, no private property rights, economic failure, culture death, and destruction of health care. please help!!

Your thesis statement is your argument - so it should be something you believe in why communism failed (and therefore will help to structure your essay).

Example using the collapse of Communism in the USSR: "Communism collapsed in the USSR due to the inability of perestroika and glasnost to be compatible with the communist structure" - you might not believe that, but at least that's a defendable point.

Make sense?

[anson34]

I have to write a research essay in english on why communism has failed as a political system. I am having troubles coming up with the thesis statement. i am using examples such as no justice, no private property rights, economic failure, culture death, and destruction of health care. please help!!

Your thesis statement is your argument - so it should be something you believe in why communism failed (and therefore will help to structure your essay).

Example using the collapse of Communism in the USSR: "Communism collapsed in the USSR due to the inability of perestroika and glasnost to be compatible with the communist structure" - you might not believe that, but at least that's a defendable point.

Make sense?

Although tested many times throughout history, communism has failed as a political system due to its injustice towards the people; a lack of property rights towards the people; the death of culture; and destruction of health care, all leading to inevitable economic failure.

[scirwode]

Here's your thesis in its most basic form:

Communism has failed as a political system.

Paraphrase this (put it into other words) and you're ready to go.

Your thesis need not (and should not) include a list of the things you're going to cover in your essay unless your teacher (incorrectly) told you to do so.

[hillocke]

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