Is this a good BIO? please help!?

[tai38]

Angela Raimondi is an aspiring actor specializing in film, theatre, and commercial work. She is born and raised in San Diego, California by her loving grandparents. As a child she grew up around the art of music and began to sing and dance at the age of 11. She attended Chula Vista High School and joined an award winning show choir, “The Main Attraction.” After high school she took an acting for television and film class at Southwestern College and fell in love with the craft. She is currently studying Theater as an honor student at Pierce College in Los Angeles, California, and realized acting is her true passion. Angela has appeared in College plays such as, “Beyond Therapy” and “Parallel Lives” at Southwestern College. Her recent production was a play, “A View from the Bridge” at San Diego Mesa College. She is also directing and working on filming short scenes over the summer and doing extra work. In her spare time Angela enjoys playing on her computer, updating her website, and professionally racing her car. Angela would love to work with casting directors, agents, and anyone who is working on a project! Her dream is to star in an action movie with Maggie Q, and Leonardo DiCaprio. She is very thankful to have people follow her on her journey to success.



Any suggestions? or honest opinions? How do I make this less boring?

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