Are these good drawings? Please critique :3?

[curadhan74]

I'm a 13 year old girl who has always loved drawing :) It's one of the ways I best express myself, so my drawings are a bit... dark, you can say. I've never taken any art classes and I haven't really showed my drawings to anyone outside of my friends and family, at least not till now haha.
Please tell me what you think and critique :3 Thanks.

http://s1149.photobucket.com/albums/o585/RedRaven18/?action=view&current=WP_000444.jpg

http://s1149.photobucket.com/albums/o585/RedRaven18/?action=view&current=WP_000446.jpg

http://s1149.photobucket.com/albums/o585/RedRaven18/?action=view&current=WP_000447.jpg

http://s1149.photobucket.com/albums/o585/RedRaven18/?action=view&current=WP_000448.jpg


By the way, I know in some of them, especially the last one, the shading isn't smooth, but I did that purposely.

Thanks :3

[chozai65]

Not bad at all! I just see a few anatomy errors, mostly the first one, but that just takes some practice; mainly the shoulders/legs are what needs help in it. As it's canine/dog, the shoulders should be further back and are more smooth. If you look up a few pictures of real dogs, you'll see what I mean.

You're quite good, though, and you have lots of potential. Keep at it. :) Might I suggest registering on deviantArt? Great place to show off your work. :)